Post edited at 5:38 pm on June 25, 2008 by Anonymous
Post edited at 5:20 pm on June 25, 2008 by porcelain cinderella-------When we're taught to love everyone,to love our enemies,what value does that place on love?
It's pretty good for the most part but you rhyme at the end of you lines and then you stop so it doesn't really flow.
that was intentional to show the increased stress and smooth flow with his mind
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It's pretty good for the most part but you rhyme at the end of you lines and then you stop so it doesn't really flow. 
