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poem i wrote
Replies: 16Last Post June 25 3:24pm by Minnick
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Quote: from gothrocker at 3:19 pm on June 25, 2008

Quote: from Praise the Lard at 3:10 pm on June 25, 2008

Quote: from gothrocker at 3:09 pm on June 25, 2008

*gag*

  thats nasty and demeaning!


 

 it's social commentary on the lack of raomance in 21st century america  
 guess some poeple can't appreciate good art


Right...So your trying to tell me that your poem is romantic and good art? if you seriously want to claim your work as good art...write free verse poetry not including someone elses work...aka roses are red violets are blue...


excuse me but i don't have to defend my art ot someone of your low tastes

that section is a symbol for the  old romantic times where chilvary wasn't dead
the last bits are how sexually obssessed we are and the ps is representative of how little attentione we pay to people we care about

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3:22 pm on June 25, 2008 | Joined Mar. 2005 | 685 Days Active
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Quote: from Praise the Lard at 6:22 pm on June 25, 2008

Quote: from gothrocker at 3:19 pm on June 25, 2008

Quote: from Praise the Lard at 3:10 pm on June 25, 2008

Quote: from gothrocker at 3:09 pm on June 25, 2008

*gag*    

   thats nasty and demeaning!


 

  it's social commentary on the lack of raomance in 21st century america  
  guess some poeple can't appreciate good art


 

 Right...So your trying to tell me that your poem is romantic and good art? if you seriously want to claim your work as good art...write free verse poetry not including someone elses work...aka roses are red violets are blue...


excuse me but i don't have to defend my art ot someone of your low tastes

that section is a symbol for the  old romantic times where chilvary wasn't dead
the last bits are how sexually obssessed we are and the ps is representative of how little attentione we pay to people we care about


Ouch. I'm glad we're friends. Heh.

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