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tragic, death defying, what am i going to do?
Replies: 4Last Post July 19 5:30pm by dragonking
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( tragic romance )


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turn up the music....

im lying here
on the ground
my heart beat
the only sound
i hear...

take some pills
slit my throat
go a little deeper
feel my body getting weaker
but feel no pain!

i dont know what to do
i dont know what to say
tired of bleeding just to breathe
its getting kind of old...
i just dont know!

the cries the tears
what are we doing here?
why am i breathing
i know why im bleeding

im tired of living
i still feel no pain
but its swelling inside of me
just waiting...

and i just dont know!

i dont know what to do  
i dont know what to say
tired of bleeding its just not healing
it's getting kind of old...
i just know!!

(i dont have a goddam clue)

(what to do?)

(scream!!!)

im lying hear  
on the ground
my heart beat?
you hear no sound!!!

Post edited at 12:27 pm on July 20, 2008 by tragic romance

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x508xmayzx


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0_0 no thanks

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cadetjones2011


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is this suppose to be a poem?

Post edited at 5:02 pm on July 19, 2008 by cadetjones2011

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zammy


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its good but still needs a lil fixin!

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dragonking


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Quote: from cadetjones2011 at 8:00 pm on July 19, 2008

is this suppose to be a poem?

It sounds like one.  

You had some spelling errors.  It's tired, healing, and it's.

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