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Pretend you wrote this
and give it to your girl.
Replies: 17Last Post July 4 1:47pm by SmellyJoe
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"My mistress' eyes are nothing like the sun"

MY mistress' eyes are nothing like the sun
Coral is far more red than her lips' red:
If snow be white, why then her breasts are dun;
If hairs be wires, black wires grow on her head.
I have seen roses damask'd, red and white, 5
But no such roses see I in her cheeks;
And in some perfumes is there more delight
Than in the breath that from my mistress reeks.
I love to hear her speak, yet well I know
That music hath a far more pleasing sound: 10
I grant I never saw a goddess go,—
My mistress, when she walks, treads on the ground:
And yet, by heaven, I think my love as rare
As any she belied with false compare.

- William Shakespeare

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What are you trying to say?  I did write that!

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This poem provides a far greater compliment than any poem that creates "false compare" and that's why it's so great.

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Sending your girlfriend unoriginal poems, sayings, or lines and pretending they're your own never works out. You can just google a line of it and you'll find who it really belongs to.

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I WROTE THIS.

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It's called Sonnet 130* and I personally love that.

*whoops.

Post edited at 10:12 am on July 7, 2008 by BlueAutomatic

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ooohhh is that from, much ado about nothing? arrggghh i've heard that before!

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Quote: from deaths door14 at 9:18 pm on July 4, 2008

ooohhh is that from, much ado about nothing? arrggghh i've heard that before!

It was part of the English Literature GCSE anthology this year and probably past years too.

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Quote: from BlueAutomatic at 9:18 pm on July 4, 2008

Quote: from deaths door14 at 9:18 pm on July 4, 2008

ooohhh is that from, much ado about nothing? arrggghh i've heard that before!

It was part of the English Literature GCSE anthology this year and probably past years too.


i've been in college the past two years lol.

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wow, nothing like that can EVER come out of my head lol

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Quote: from deaths door14 at 9:19 pm on July 4, 2008

Quote: from BlueAutomatic at 9:18 pm on July 4, 2008

Quote: from deaths door14 at 9:18 pm on July 4, 2008

ooohhh is that from, much ado about nothing? arrggghh i've heard that before!
 

 It was part of the English Literature GCSE anthology this year and probably past years too.


i've been in college the past two years lol.


...It's been on past anthologies. I'm pretty sure they don't change them that often, especially not in the last few years.

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lol. the major problem with Shakesphere, is that so few people seem to understand exactly what it is he is saying. I was in an honours english class and people had difficulty going through Othello. I'm glad i learnt him though.

It is quite a nice poem, honest and frank and pretty flattering!

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i remember it because i studied it in english, he loved her even though she was everything that was considered to be ugly and not beautiful.
it's quite romantic really.

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Nice poem.

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Quote: from keiraoasis at 9:22 pm on July 4, 2008

lol. the major problem with Shakesphere, is that so few people seem to understand exactly what it is he is saying. I was in an honours english class and people had difficulty going through Othello. I'm glad i learnt him though.  

It is quite a nice poem, honest and frank and pretty flattering!


Yeah, my teacher seemed pretty amazed I got the meaning of that poem after the first reading, as apparently she's not seen many students get it.

It's not difficult.

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