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A kind of poem.

Replies: 6 — Last Post Oct. 15 1:32am by BlackCookie

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( BlackCookie )

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Walking in a desert. Neverending desert.

Blandness streches in every direction.

Toiling forward.

Climb dunes, fight sand, shivering night, burning day.

An oasis, happiness, play... it lasts but a second.

Maybe just a dream.

Keep moving in the always emptyness.

Should never be here...

Can't go on like this but fearing the end.

Closer, closer but further away.

Conflict in head, do it anyway.

Wounds cut deep, may never mend.
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It doesn't all rhyme, it's just a collection of thoughts, and it's how my life feels

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The way we were is the way that I wanna be.

( BlackCookie )

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I'm also probably the only person who's life makes them feel like this.

Ah well.

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The way we were is the way that I wanna be.

CherryD

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They don't seem to fit together. It's all pieces and...pieces that roughly match?

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History Lesson:
Me: "Why do we need so many sources?"
Friend: "To go with our french fries?"

Niddan

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LMFAO

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We own you, you better recognize, suckaaaa.

Rollo Tomasi

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Quote: from BlackCookie at 9:36 pm on Oct. 14, 2008

I'm also probably the only person who's life makes them feel like this.
Ah well.

any feeling that you have ever had has been felt by countless others and you're not alone in any way shape or form.

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if the radiance of a thousand trolls
were to burst forth at once into the sky,
that would be like the splendor of the mighty one
now i am become rollo, destroyer of threads